Due to life circumstances disrupting my Subeta time, I am sorry to say but the short curl hair will not be submitted. :( I intend upon returning with BETTER hairs and clothing items, so I deeply and most sincerely apologize about this. I feel like such a bad person since quite a few people held interest, but I just dont have the time. I AM going to be doing art commissions, since I am in desperate need of money (as is everyone), so if you'd like a CW, or some kind of art similar to my forum image, please feel free to smail me. Once again, I apologize for the inconvenience and disappointment.

not sure how or why i got in this ping group =D but as i'm already here xD here comes my opinion: i LOVE the Stockings, the Lace is really nice.

i'd totally buy the makeup, but i would change the bottom lashes a little bit, they look a little pixely

the headpiece is gorgeous, too, though for my taste the rose could be a bit more bloodred and less dark

great set <3

Hm, I tried a three-dot thing which is probably why the bottom lashes look so funny, but I see what you mean. :0 As for the hat, they're poppies rather than roses (Not that you can tell. Hahaha) But sure, I could see them needing to be lightened up a bit. I'll see what others (if anyone else shows up) have to say. Thank you very much for your input! ♥

I personally like this hair a lot. I'm not exactly the best at critiquing but I think the way it falls is lovely. I think the shading on the hair itself is also great.

The only thing I personally think needs to be fixed is possibly darken the outline of the flower a little? It seems kinda strange against the entirely black-lined hair and horns. It probably doesn't have to be black but maybe a little darker. :o

Wow! That wig is simply gorgeous! I need a copy of the black(or a very dark brown). The blunt bangs have very dark black line art concentrated around the tips though, it should be less thick for such a light pink color. I really like swirly tendrils of the hair and the stray hairs because they look more realistic. The shading is good around the top but some of the bottom right tendrils don't seem to be shaded at all. I like the pearls on the little horns but they seem disconnected. I'm also a little confused on what the CI is. EDIT: Actually there are quite a few unshaded looking parts. They seem to be one base color without any of the shadow it should have. Refer to the image I've circled the places. :)

I think the lines, especially on the outlying wispy strands need to be a bit thicker. The single strands consisting of a single line I would definitely be concerned about showing up properly on a background. I'd also consider adding a few strands of hair between the legs to give it a more 3D feel, but that's definitely your call.

Subeta has a lot of CW wigs, so I imagine it's very hard to compete, even if your style of drawing hair is quite unique. Limited editions and hard to get items will probably sell better because of the added value of rarity, so giving them out through a contest may very well gain you more interest than just setting it into a shop. Plus that way you can control who gets it if you have any qualms about people just being interested for the sake of reselling or whatnot.

The item is called "Blushing wilted petal". So it's one of the flower's petal ripped and wilting, with strands of hair around it. Disconnected how? Like I should put lines between them, or closer together?

Single strands of black tend to show up fairly well, and if not, they tend not to be too heavy a loss. I avoided hair between the legs because typically people layer their hair over outfits, and it can disrupt the item, but I suppose seeing as the bangs are so high up, I could add it in.

Huh, that's a better viewpoint of it than I certainly had. Haha!

Good point about the legs thing. I was thinking only of pants for some reason.

I think it would only count if the hair went to the waist at the front, but in this case, I think it could still use the hair between the arm and legs. c:

Oh I see, that certainly makes more sense now. At first glance I wasn't sure what I was looking at. Well the pearls seem to be separate instead of linked together like the [preview=string of pearls] for example. You can clearly see the link between the pearls there, the pearls on your wig are fine on placement but they need lines between them to link them together. :)

In the first post, I have implemented all your critiques including a couple that were mentioned off-forum. c: How is it?

The shape is super nice, and i'm looking forward to this wig. :D Especially that black recolour!

That wig is gorgeous! I have a bit of critique from the viewpoint of someone who loves layering, though. That little bit of hair that goes on top of the HA's left shoulder? That makes it so the wig has to go on top of any chest items. Since the wig is so long, that makes it hard to use any items that aren't skintight, such as dresses. Either you put the dress on top of the wig and make that bit on the shoulder look awkward, or you layer the dress under the wig and only get the parts of the dress that are inside the outline of the base.

EXAMPLE: Dress layered under wig vs dress layered over wig

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To fix that, you can make those strands of hair just a little bit shorter so they don't cover the shoulder. Alternatively, you can push them to the side so the neck is fully uncovered; that way a chest item could be layered on top of it without it looking like the HA stuffed a strand of hair in the front of their shirt.

I see your point! It's going to be a tisp difficult to adjust the bangs and keeps the same fluid appeal, but I'm sure I could manage. I'll have to modify both sides to a shorter length. At most, I'll try to make it touch the top of the shoulder. This is going to be kinda hard to do without making it look like the front part of her hair is too short and choppy. flail

[edit]Edits made in Spoiler above as "EDITS TWO"

, and , I know you 2 wear horns alot... do you think you might be interested in a wig like this?

Depending on the color schemes, I would possibly be quite interested in this hair :)

Thank you for the ping.

I'll ping you for recolors when they come out. c:

Thank you ❤️ I may be interested in this color too I just have to check when I'm home as my phone distorts colors.

I love this wig style, I just don't use pink :3 I'll be all over the brown version though (and others)

damn i want like 8 colours... lol