Sure then c:

This switches between the more open-faced and lighter banged version, and the more narrow original. Does it look better, any more critiques?

I'd still remove a bit of the bangs around the mouth area.

Awe. D: I feel like that would take away it's scruffiness. Let's see what the others have to say.

the bangs do seem to blend better with the rest of it now and I like how it opens up a little more around the face. I personally am much more tempted by the updated version :)

The bangs are def better. I don't think you needed to move it up tho, I kinda liked where it sat on the head before, but I'm not one to be bothered by lower bangs and all. I'm cool wit it. xD; I like the scruffiness too, I don't mind the hair going over the cheeks a bit, makes it cute imo.

Huzzah! :'3

I felt like it cluttered too far into the eyes. I'm going to keep the cheek scruff just because it'd change the hair too much if I did remove them. ^-^ By the way, just to confirm, what colors were a definite "slot please" or "ping for interest" for you?

(pssst, hey there, Zaw asked me to drop in)

For the most part this wig is fine I think, I just spotted one thing that concerns me a bit

It's not obviousat all until you look at the lighter colours, so you might only need to fix it for them. (Also I can't tell if you fixed it in the newest version 'cause it's a dark colour. Sorry!)

I posted newer versions of the ginger and the red in the main post, so hopefully those are bright enough, but I see what you mean. I'll thicken those spots right up. The part that goes into the face is a tip of hair. Does it really look out of place?

I think it's possibly just a resize issue? Like it's fallen between two pixels and gone a bit wonky. That point just looks a bit strong compared to the lines around it

Alright, I can fix that. c: Thank you for pointing it out.

I shall probably poke you about commissions xD

Alrighty. c:

[edit] AHEM. Seeing as I messed up this post before, allow me to repent. I would PREFER real money, but I can and will take CSC as an alternative.

My apologies. ;w;