It's so cute and fat. -lol- A bit bulky though. Maybe it's just the lines. Seems to draw total attention away from the HA to it. I think it is the lines.

@blackwolf_2009 The lines would definitely be redone. xD Like I mentioned, it was just a quick lineart to get the concept out. I'm not even sure what the hell happened in the smaller version to make the lines so thick. D: Photoshop y u so weird?

I can also shrink it down too, if it's too large.

Awww. Maybe it would be cute if one of the feet would be visible? Since it's on its belly.

If you resize it in Illustrator or something, pay attention to the border and its options. Sometimes you resize stuff and the border stays the same size, which probably happened in your case?

Damn, that is so so cute XD

: i think its adorable ;v; i dont think im the best person for advise though since i havent even really done many CWs on subeta xD

thought when i saw it i thought about the prinnies in disgaea =v=;;

hmm if its a plushie i think the thread should be more noticeable since atm its really light @@

Yeah, the threads were just penciled in lightly to start with. I'm not really sure if I've got the right look for them yet. Once I'm sure about them, they're going to be much darker. ...I love Prinnies. xD

Oh mai, hey. xD Thank you! :3

Would you maybe offer a suggestion on the placing/angle of the visible foot? You're better at this than I am. xD

i think it would look cute as a hat or sitting on a hat to ;)

Haha, you know, I actually played around with that. xD Something like this, or maybe slanted slightly?

He's kinda tiny there though...

@blackwolf_2009 Does it look any less bulky now, in the first post?

Yep it was the lines! -lol-

@blackwolf_2009 Okay, that's good. xD Well, I've started trying to shade it now. :c This stuff isn't as easy as some people make it look. D':

I'd believe it.

If the shading is scaring you, maybe try making the shading similar to the , where it is very easy to see the cell-shading?

Yeah, that's sort of the direction I'm going by the looks of it. xD I'll give that a try then, thanks!

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The penguin is looking really great! I'll let the actual artists give the critiques x3

Thanks~ ; u ; Watch, after I finally manage to get it ready to submit, no one's gonna want a slot. xD

I hope that isn't true! May I preclaim a slot? :3

may want one as well?

If you want one, sure. xD

Omg, thank you so much, YES absolutely I would love to preclaim a slot I think it looks so great when it's on top of the avatar's head!! So so cute!!

I did that mostly for lulz, but I won't rule it out as a final possibility. :) Once the colors and shading are done, then comes the placement. I'll go ahead and slot you for a preclaim though.