I'm writing a poem. Iambetic thing... where there's 10 syllables a line?

I just need some proofreading done, if you're up for it, can ya PM me please and thank you? {And maybe help me figure out where to go next.}

There are indeed 10 syllables per line! I'm totally terrible at iambic pentameter, or else I'd help. Hope you find someone to help!

I'd be happy to take a look at it!