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May 3, 2009 16 years ago
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I recently draw a cyborg (I think so) as my friend wants a-something-like-robot character for her school project. So, what do you think of this? Anything I need to improve on or any suggestion? And, what colour do you think suitable for her?

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Yes, I do notice her body is a little bit weird. Neway, not really planning to change that soon. xDD


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May 3, 2009 16 years ago
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The feet kind of throw me off. O_o they're a little... unnatural.

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May 3, 2009 16 years ago
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Yep. There're suppose to be like that. What do you expect from a robot? xDD


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May 3, 2009 16 years ago
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I dunno. xP They just throw me off, is all. I love the rest though. =D Then I saw her feet and I was like, "OMG HOW DO THEY DO THAT?!" and stared for a few minutes. xD Maybe if they looked a bit more mechanical, instead of like her real feet were actually in there? :P

You know, less like boots, more like part of her body. Bit of exposed wiring or something?

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May 3, 2009 16 years ago
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Oh, wow. That's one pretty cyborg. Really nice details you've put in there, too. I do think her feet are a bit strange, but they fit in nicely with the theme.

As for colors... perhaps some brown and... a color that looks good with brown? Maybe a slightly reddish gray/silver?

All in all, though, I really like this.

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May 3, 2009 16 years ago
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Thanks for the critiques. c: Now I know where to fix. ^__^

Thank youuuuu.


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May 3, 2009 16 years ago
Lindsey
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I think it's incredibly cool.

The only thing irking me is her finger. And I'm sure you can tell which one. XD

May 4, 2009 16 years ago
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Wow, that&;s really awesome. I can&;t draw mecha to save my life. Hahaha.
The only thing I would say is that her head looks a bit too large for the rest of her body.
I&;m not great with colors, so I can&;t help you there. o:
yeah, agreed, but fuck, this is a concept sketch, not a finished piece, so seriously, i LOVE IT.

excellent design and costume.

May 4, 2009 16 years ago
Judgement
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I really like the idea of a silver with light blue for this colour scheme. C: All I would suggest is to add a bit more to the face- it seems more human-like than cyborg. Maybe even adding a metal plate reaching from the chest to the neck area? I dunno! The detail is amazing though.

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