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Dec 20, 2014 11 years ago
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I'm currently in the process of writing my first piece that's longer than a short story...

I'm about 10 chapters deep into a 50 page novella.

I already have my basic story outline completed and I'm working on filling up my character info cheat sheets.

Any ideas on what else I could do to help?

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Dec 20, 2014 11 years ago
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I wouldn't call myself a professional writer by any stretch, but I really do love the craft. My advice to you may not be what you're looking for but I let you in on a few little secrets that help me.

Is there a certain part of your novella/story line that you have incredibly clear in your mind, be it a character change, resolution, ending? I find starting at the part I have the grasp of or have a lot of ideas for can help. It allows you to build around and can help stimulate ideas for other chapters. It is a bit unorthodox to skip around in your writing process, but it truly helps me.

If the main focus of my story/the part I have outlined the clearest is a scene where the narrator learns something unfavorable about another character, I'll start there. By writing a scene where some type of reaction/character change occurs, it allows me to see where my character began and where I need to get him fairly early on in my drafting. Even if I decide to scrap the scene or change it significantly this type of skipping around still functions as pre-writing.

Dec 20, 2014 11 years ago
roomba
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Thanks for the input!

Dec 20, 2014 11 years ago
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My pleasure! I hope it's helpful

Dec 21, 2014 11 years ago
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--Characters (are they multi-dimensional or flat?) --Setting-- (make us see what you see, smell, feel, taste) --Plot (do you have a clear plot or is it convoluted?) --Pacing (day-by-day, event-to-event, little things and big things)

Those are the kinds of things to think about when writing, especially longer than a short story.

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Dec 21, 2014 11 years ago
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Part of the trick is coming up with a story that has a whole novel in it. I've had trouble all my life until late coming up with a story that wasn't a million words long, but that's because I've always made up stories with heroes who had a lot of character to develop, villains nefarious enough to keep running in the long-term, plots that require a lot of elements to complete. And that's come easy to me because I prefer the high fantasy genre which is full of all that awesome stuff.

Or, you were a bit vague - if you mean you aren't trouble getting the story to be long enough but just how to get writing it...a few things I do when I get stuck. One, I tell the story to someone. Someone who loves me and has the patience to let me tell them the story - nowadays that's usually my husband, but before that it was my mom or my brother or a close friend or sometimes a boyfriend (not all of them had that sort of tolerance =P then again, some of my best stories are literally hours long to tell...). I found a lot of the time if I had a spot where I didn't know what happened, in repeated tellings, "And then after they finally find the Gatekeeper and get to the Nether and...stuff happens, I dunno, it's like important and stuff, and then they finally get to Death's citadel..." turns slowly into, "And then in the Nether they [creepy trials they have to pass to get to Death's citadel]."

Also roleplaying with characters helps me - it helps me immensely in developing characters with which I'm less familiar, and it helps me uncover plot elements with solid characters. I already know them well enough that when roleplaying, I'm more likely to find something that rings true - a "this happens in my story!" moment. Or something else similar.

If you're an outlining person, which I don't tend to be, I find notecards helpful. Especially if you're shaky on the plot. You just write a synopsis of each major plot event on one card - this way you can lay them out in front of you, rearrange them, add them, remove them. It's a nice visual. There are so many ways to outline, this is the only one that works for me (if I outline at all) and I only discovered it by trying a bunch of others, so try a bunch of different stuff!

I also almost never use character profiles - I have one book that's an exception but there are a looot of characters for its size and a lot of them are tertiary and they all have specialties that are really important and I can't remember them all for everyone without a little help. In that case, the skeleton is something along the lines of name, age, birthday, gender, race (it's modern fantasy), role, specialties, bio, weapons. All those things I can't usually remember - which yes, includes name sometimes. I usually remember race and gender is preeeetty easy to remember, but everything else can be really hard.

Anyway hope those are helpful tips to you.

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Dec 22, 2014 11 years ago
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Length is only good when it's not forced.

What I've found seems to make me write long things is adding over time. Writing, then coming back to it after a while and fixing/adding stuff. Outlining chapters, then when I write the chapters I fix/add stuff.

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