...and I was hoping I could get someone fluent in the language to help me out.

A 150 word paragraph makes up 12% of my whole German grade this semester, and I'm freaking out about how wrong all my grammar must be. I've had my friend check most of it, but I'd feel a lot better if I could get help from someone who knows more than I do.

As far as I know, I'm still not allowed to post foreign languages on the forums, but if anybody can lend me a hand grammar-wise, I'd love you forever. ;o;

Good luck with this. I would love to learn german!

Have you gone in and talked to your professor/teacher about it? I know my prof. from my last german class was totally willing to go over everything with us and make sure it was totally correct. Im sure s/he'd be willing to go over it with you, and make suggestions for you to change.

If you find someone German you could just sMail your paragraph right?

I'm not 100% perfect at grammer but I'm not that bad too. At least german is my mother tongue XD . So if it helps sMail me the paragraph and I'll take a look at it.