The Serpenths, seeing the Aeries fussing over each other in the treetops around Subeta, grew jealous--just slightly jealous, they claim.
Without a word, they all slithered off into the night (much to the joy of the smaller species, who would finally have a bit of rest without fear of being eaten), leaving many owners confused as to the whereabouts of their beloved pets.
But of course, they've returned--and brought a surprise with them. No one is quite certain where those patterns came from, but they seem a bit attached.
What do you think?
December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Xuanmeng
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Can we keep the old colors and maybe shorten the neck a little on the revamped version? Also, the new version seems to be suffering from a bad case of Corpse Eyes - maybe sneak some color in there?

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Rayen
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Who drew the newer version? I must hug them lol. The Serp. was my first pet. -Cuddles Sinister- His name not fits SSSSSSSSSo well.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Frost
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While it is quite an improvement, there are a few things that could use a small touch-up. Like the angle of the neck, it looks, well... a bit awkward. In the 'it seems like I've cracked my neck' way.


Second thing that stings in the eye a bit is the little tuft of hair that goes over the upper wing joint. If possible, hide it behind the wing?


Other than that, I don't have much critique for this one. P: Now go an be amazed about it.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Hexadecimate
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I think the eye is a bit poorly defined. It just might because it's a similar color to the body though, but it's hard to tell just where the eyeball is. The two random feathers under the wings are weird too. But on the whole, I like this. The serpenth was actually one of my favorite pets way back when Subeta was starting up.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Deleted User

Although, I'd like to see the old colors on the new Serpenth, overall I love the revamp. Kudos to the artist! bd

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Deleted User

Simply amazing! o___o I love the revamp.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Lyn
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I think it is truly smashing! I love the new look. I would like to say the artist has done a wonderful job!! ♥

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Nimarai
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me wants

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Khalek
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Cool I love the new revamp.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Salem
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Quetzalcoatl ftw ;D

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Ava
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Oh man, that is freakin' amazing!

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by MEAT
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Oh wow~ I do agree about the wings being a bit too bulky, but other than that it's beautiful. I can't wait to see how the other colors will turn out with this one!

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Deleted User

they should get rid of the spots and some of the hair on the head

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Apostate_491
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Well, it looks much more like a snake now, that's for sure. But it seems too...feminine to me... ^^; I'm thinking it's because of the more-curly hair, but I dunno. o.0 I'm gonna vote for the new one anyway. :3

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Will
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i like it, it's a really dramatic change.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by zooky
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You made me love Serpenths...O.o If they revamp I whant one

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Barracuda_651
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This makes me want to get one even more.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by minno150
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Eh, I think it'd look better if the hair still stuck upward. Now it looks... like a horse? Or like it stole hair from Shania Twain. XD

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by FreekShow
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wow, i foresee one of my pets getting changed in the not so far away future

i do agree with some others i think maybe the wings should be spread back a bit so you can see more of the back detail

awesome work either way, i really like how the patterns look like a anaconda and a ball python, very nice

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Synbar
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Oh, my! I love the additional detail, definitely a yes, although not so sure re the coloring (brown...? hmmm).

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Mystiya
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Very nice redraw. Looks alot better with the natural colors

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Milkyushigirl
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one word beautiful. The wings seem more bulky and almost furry, thou love the lose feathers at the base of the wings. Scales and snake like pattern along the back are lovely and gotta love the hissing tongue ^-^; Also the eyes look more deviant like the Serpenth has been up to something cruel and conniving. Cheers to the artist, now if only more work and colors would be given to the Illumis and all shall be well in the world.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Spy_628
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-shrug-
It'd be cooler if it had that cobra headpiece thing. x:

All the hair and feathers kinda' draws away from the specie.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Julzyfox
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super model hair 8D

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by InTheShadow
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Love it, but now I want one but I don't have enough room. xD

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Deleted User

Hmm...I think I'd like the new one if it didn't have the hair. But that's just me. -shrugs-
I'm gonna go with the old one this time around.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Snake
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I swear, if you guys revamp it to look like that, I'll end up getting 10 of them XD
-loves mucho-

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by TheseHeights
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BETTER. :]
December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Poet
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FINALLY.

I prefer the old one. :|

No, just kidding. Haha. xD

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Selene
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Oh my gowd...The new one is so...soo...soo...

...Wounderful.

I voted for the new one, it's just so...wow...

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by mistress_of_fire2007
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Zomg,I love the new look!!Almost makes me want to change one of my Montres into one.....almost.Lol.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Arayus
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Ooooh I like it. It reminds me of a Basilisk. :3

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Andreea
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It's so awesome that I don't even think there was a need for a poll, there's no question which version is the best!!

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Deleted User

The wings seem too low. But it's pretty. :3

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Deleted User

Woah, they'd actually look like snakes instead of pudgy worms! I like the new style a lot.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Venom
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Absolutely amazing job DNA! The only thing I see that might need a little tweaking is the size of the wings, but that has already been brought up. Thank you again for a beautiful revamp.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Gem
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ohemgee.. that is amazing. I would totally get one of those. The only MINOR problem I have is that I would like it if the wings were perhaps a bit higher, a bit smaller, and if the near one was like... rotated backwards a bit.. it doesn't look like it matches the angle of the far one. Otherwise, I love it. _ The face is especially lovely.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Jacket_683
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Did anyone tell Saggi that his wigs have been stolen? !

Kidding, kidding. The mane is fine. But as Akele said, the wings seem just a little too large.

Amazing revamp, really. Props to the Artist. ♥

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by vessel
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Oh my.
I /must/ have one. XD I loved serpenths before, but now I absolutely have to get my own.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Serecino
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showers DNA with love

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Seoni
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Wow, this is the best re-draw I've seen so far.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Dokuja
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I don't see how it's a completely different species - it's still serpentine, still has a mane of hair, still has wings.

I don't think that adding a scale pattern (which is so beautifully detailed) makes that much difference.

votes Revamp for President?

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by exquisite
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HOLYSNAPS. this re-draw is amazing! its completely gorgeous, and you managed to actually make me want a serpenth now! kudos to the artist- this is, wow. Amazing. Gorgeous. Simply divine.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Nostalgia_507
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Ahh, revamped design means revamped colors if it is accepted. I am torn. I dont know which one...

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by DNA_558
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I will most certainly try adjusting the wings a bit--at least the size, if not the positioning as well.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Hazy_164
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Beautiful! I'm looking forward to seeing updates in other colours, I think I'll change one of my pets into a serpenth

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by elf
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Wow, it's scary--a good scary. It's so...different, but I love it.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by hartandhind
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O________O
omg....it's gorgeous.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by ChickieDi
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It looks like an escaped lab animal for the hair club for men...
I like the body and face, the wings look strange like they are too far forward but overall it will probably grow on me.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by Medinaquirin
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This looks incredible. I'm a little surprised about the coloring, but it does lend itself quite well once you get used to it. I can't wait to see a glacier version of this. Gorgeous work. ^-^

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