oh thanks for letting me know XD

I'll fix that!

try uploading to imgur its much more reliable than tiny pic!

Ok here's another try

the lineart looks good, but the belt looks a little too straight atm. A belt naturally curves a little around the body, but the way its sitting its straight across.

Yeah that's what I was worried about. I'm a little concerned about how much it ought to curve. To google for references owo

I'm happy the line art looks good though. I thought my lineart sucked XD

The best way is to look at the shape of other belts on site in the wardrobe. It doesn't need to slant too too much, but it def needs a curve. I can't think of any names of the top of my head of belts but there are a ton.

This close to Subeta Style?

I dont know much but I think the little ribbon looks cute. :)

idk if you ignored the changes i gave you but: https://earthswonderfulhues.files.wordpress.com/2015/05/red_bow.jpg

the bow is still not in the center of the ribbon and the ribbon part that is downwards needs to come from the sides, not from the center of the bow

also the center part is too big compared to the bow itself, please look up for references to understand how the bow works x:

Oh i was following the reference for the ribbon sash that has the bow above the ribbon. I thought it looked cute so I copied that part.

Thank you!

you mean a bow attached to the ribbon? because otherwise the bow has to be centered with the ribbon since... they are one whole thing? do you have the ref?

yeah

LOL i thought it was rl reference, not art

well, either this bow is attached to the clothing or it's just plain wrong, because no bow can be so off from the ribbon itself. it just doesn't make sense

since you are starting on art, i'd suggest always using RL references, not other people's art. art is not always accurate

Ohhhh I'm so sorry for the confusion XD

So would it get rejected even if I showed the reference? :o

I just thought how the bow was placed was really cute x3

idk about getting approved or not, that's up to the staff

but as i said, if the bow is supposed to be attached on the clothing, it's fine. otherwise it's just wrong. up to you though

Hmm..... so I probably shouldn't try selling it for anything then huh. What about the CI?

not saying you shouldn't sell. if someone likes it, they can totally buy it. i'm just pointing out that the bow placement isn't right if they are all one ribbon

ci lacks shading on the silver part and the lineart is pretty thin imo

Ok so of course they would be two different items, but is anyone interested?

They are based off the Enchantix Transformation from my childhood show "Winx Club"

Enchantix

personally, i love it the idea. would it be ribbon-like? transparent? semi-transparent would be cool. what colors would you do? id adore it in like.. glittery gold. but it would be gorgeous in any color really. let me know if you release this hun

Oh I never thought of semi-transparent :O

I was thinking of selling the design since I need money actually really bad.

So colors would be up in the air DX