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Nov 24, 2015 10 years ago
Vyrania
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[IMG]http://i65.tinypic.com/29nh40l.png[/IMG]

Feedback needed! If someone could redline, that'd be great!

Nov 26, 2015 10 years ago
Inknote
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This is super duper cute!!!!!

Nov 26, 2015 10 years ago
Vyrania
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thank you inky! :D

Nov 26, 2015 10 years ago
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Let me know when you're done with it, I might want a slot ^ Aghhh it's so cute I keep looking at it haha.

Nov 26, 2015 10 years ago
Vyrania
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xD

Actually, I'm hoping to sell the design.

Nov 26, 2015 10 years ago
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DANGIT VYRANIA.

Nov 26, 2015 10 years ago
Vyrania
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Lol don't wanna buy it? XD

Nov 26, 2015 10 years ago
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I wish! but I don't have much csc to burn. Even slot price was gunna hurt, haha. I wanna though ;_; Plus gosh all the colors it could be. Argh. DAMNIT VYRANIA.

Nov 26, 2015 10 years ago
Vyrania
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At least somebody likes it. I wasn't sure if anyone would.

In your opinion, do you think it's ready to line or not?

Nov 26, 2015 10 years ago
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Yeah I'd say so, but as someone who doesn't know what they're talking about idk how much my opinion's worth! XD

Nov 26, 2015 10 years ago
Vyrania
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LOL! XD

Well its ok. I'll double check with someone.

Nov 26, 2015 10 years ago
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That might be a good idea haha XD

Nov 26, 2015 10 years ago
Vyrania
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Regardless, I lined it anyway XD

[IMG]http://i64.tinypic.com/28tfbdz.png[/IMG]

Nov 26, 2015 10 years ago
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Lol hell yeah, take initiative!

Nov 26, 2015 10 years ago
Vyrania
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does it look stiff at all?

Nov 26, 2015 10 years ago
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Hmm. no, but there are two things that look kinda weird? The back is weirdly puffy? Idk like it makes your head have a corner XD And the left part of the hair near the face seems harsh. Hair doesn't naturally hold it's form like that over your cheek, it sort of curves out of the way. I tried to redline it like you requested in the OP, but I've never done it before so I'm sorry if it's not helpful or I'm overstepping bounds or anything!!! >.<

Nov 26, 2015 10 years ago
Vyrania
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no that's what I need. I know what to fix now :)

thanks!

Nov 27, 2015 10 years ago
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Oh ok I'm glad I could help then ^^

Dec 9, 2015 10 years ago
Vyrania
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Partially done

Dec 9, 2015 10 years ago
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Image link seems broken - tinypic hasn't been working well the last few days.

I went straight through the link - it is cute, but I think it needs to be a little more gentle around the hips - not a straight line across, it's sitting too low to be straight like that. <3 Cute though!

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