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Feedback needed! If someone could redline, that'd be great!

This is super duper cute!!!!!

thank you inky! :D

Let me know when you're done with it, I might want a slot ^ Aghhh it's so cute I keep looking at it haha.

xD

Actually, I'm hoping to sell the design.

DANGIT VYRANIA.

Lol don't wanna buy it? XD

I wish! but I don't have much csc to burn. Even slot price was gunna hurt, haha. I wanna though ;_; Plus gosh all the colors it could be. Argh. DAMNIT VYRANIA.

At least somebody likes it. I wasn't sure if anyone would.

In your opinion, do you think it's ready to line or not?

Yeah I'd say so, but as someone who doesn't know what they're talking about idk how much my opinion's worth! XD

LOL! XD

Well its ok. I'll double check with someone.

That might be a good idea haha XD

Regardless, I lined it anyway XD

[IMG]http://i64.tinypic.com/28tfbdz.png[/IMG]

Lol hell yeah, take initiative!

does it look stiff at all?

Hmm. no, but there are two things that look kinda weird? The back is weirdly puffy? Idk like it makes your head have a corner XD And the left part of the hair near the face seems harsh. Hair doesn't naturally hold it's form like that over your cheek, it sort of curves out of the way. I tried to redline it like you requested in the OP, but I've never done it before so I'm sorry if it's not helpful or I'm overstepping bounds or anything!!! >.<

no that's what I need. I know what to fix now :)

thanks!

Oh ok I'm glad I could help then ^^

Partially done

Image link seems broken - tinypic hasn't been working well the last few days.

I went straight through the link - it is cute, but I think it needs to be a little more gentle around the hips - not a straight line across, it's sitting too low to be straight like that. <3 Cute though!