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December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

me* >.>;

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I hope the graveyard Telenine doesn't change ;.;. It cost my 3.5 mil to make my Ben the perfection that he now is and I would really hate to have wasted that sp x.X

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Okey, I did not see this before.

I agree with NoirRaven, it looks too puppy like. But except for that I like it much better than the first revamp. I think the first one was too shiny...and...not good. Now the colors looks nicee. <3

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

A much better improvement from the first revamp.

I like this one alot better. Voted for it <3

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I still adore the original but this new revamp is really cute! It gets my vote :3

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I see both fangs on the old one

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I love this one! x3 I wasn't a fan of the other revamp, but this one wins <33

... I think so anyhow D; I particularly like the feet, and amusingly enough the mouth

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Never mind, I guess. o.< I just went and read through every single comment on that old Telly, and euuugh. That was horrible. I'm shocked that Keith put up a poll for this one, instead of doing what he threatened in the first revamp comments thing. I think I'm going to refrain from giving any criticism whatsoever, so I don't get flamed by people who disagree with me. <3
My secondborn belongs to Kelpie for surviving that flaming? :3

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

At least the first one has bigger fanges.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

At least this new version /has/ both fangs. The other revamp is missing the left one, so I find. o.O

I wonder why people would have nitpicked and been all 'grr' to the last revamp? I loved it. ;3 Of course, I've been itching for a telly-nine revamp for a long time.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I really like the old one. The style it was drawn in was more cartoony and showed more personality, especially with the lovely big eyes. I love those eyes. And the general spikyness of the old one is also awesome.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Ug.. does this mean all the really cool themed versions are going to change?? Well, guess I won't be getting a Telenine. D<

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I LOVE THIS ONE. So cute. <33 Much better than the others.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Whoops. Didn't mean to make the news post drop... Ya see, this is the size restriction problem I talked about... Anything bigger than this window and it all drops to hell.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

The only thing I can complain about is the tail. It doesn't have the scruffiness of the original telenine or as the first revamp had for that matter. It looks like it slabbed a bunch of gel on it before posing. Also, it looks rather... puppy like... Which sucks because even the cartoony original looked more mature. The old revamp also looks a bit better in some areas. You can see these best when they're side by side.

But seeing how much hell that last one caused, I don't recomend going back to it. Rather, mix elements. The first revamp... I don't know, color wise, is more appealing. Maybe because he looks a bit shinier than this and as I said, less puppy like.

In fact, if I was allowed one thing to improve on this newest revamp, it would be the tail. Make it a bit scruffier... maybe like in the first revamp.

9/10 for this revamp.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

shrugs I dunno...I kinda liked the old version better...this new one is cool and all, but something about the old one attracts me more...shrugs

Maybe I'm crazy:p

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

NO dont redraw the escalade!

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Rofl. Vicious. Don't assume we aren't working on several other redraws in our super secret Staff Artist HQ. ;o

And whoever picked up on the longer fang is really observant! I didn't even notice. :3 Good jawb. X)

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I was wandering what happened to the new Telenine from the last poll. xD This one's better still. So much more detailed, but with more of the old Telenine's personality. <3 I'll be wanting one if this one comes out! xD

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I didn't even think it was possible but... damn tsume you've improved the Telenine even further o.o Tsume you really are amazing

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I like this revamp, granted I wish the tail was longer, but oh well. Nothing I can't deal with. .-o;

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Looks good.

Just one question.
Will the Hydrus or Reborn Telenine be redrawn?
Cause they look awesome as is.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

this is better than the last version! NOs I want shadowpact to be a telenine.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

It distincly reminds me of my Uncle Dale, lol... Something about it's face...
Butyes.
Lovely, Tsume... You've managed to get some o' that telenine curiousity in there. XD I'm still going to miss those big eyes, but they're lookin' good. I'm just really hoping the bloodred telenines will maintain their creepy factor...

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

ought to be focusing on redrawing the Escalade and cadogre o.o

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Ah yes, yes! This is what I want Rise to look like!

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Its true, the right fang is a tad too long, but I dont see where you guys are getting realistic from. I dont really see too many saber toothed dogs walking around, do you? Although I realize your talking about the shading, I still think that it is more of a virtual pet then a real one. And its way better then the flat original version, ne?

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

awww.... thankies Tracy. <3

xDDD so true Lucy-Steak. so much minor tweaking it hurt my artistic hand. though i'm happy with the finally project to say the least. :3

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

You guys have absolutely NO idea how much minor tweaking went into this one. XD Poor Tsumnus. We artists nitpicked every last tuft of hair. XD

It was well worth it, though.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Love the new revamp! Of course, I've pretty much loved all of the revamps so far. The artists here do a super job!

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

MUCH better than the revamp that was originally proposed! Now which of my pets should I change into a Telenine? can't decide

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I love it 0-0... I am speechless

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Dude, the proposed revamp is quite hawt. Definately prefer it over the old version. :3

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Tsume, I am glad this revamp poll and comments are going much better for you than the last time, Sweety.

I see many people will be so happy to have your version of the Telenine.

Not being a dog person myself I will be just be happy to see people getting what makes them happy.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

:3
thankies for all the comments.
I really do apperciate the critiques they make me happy as can be.

<3 <3

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Absolutely gorgeous. Though it has a few minor errors, it had my vote in a heartbeat. <33 Great job, artist. It's lively, and most proportions and whatnot are correct. If this goes through, which I'm sure it will, I'll be saving for one. ^^ Thank you for editing this so much.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I love this telenine revamp!!! <3 <3 <3

It's expression is the best, and the tail is teh awesomeness!!! i will definitely get one of these if the are released like this!!!!!

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I really like this revamp <3 The only thing is that the tooth on the far side is a tad longer than the other but that's it.
Great work <333

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Great job Tsume, all my grievances about the previous version have been resolved. Wonderful art, wonderful. <3

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

does this mean we can get them again?

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

VERY nice! I love him!

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I love it, except that the tooth on the far side is just a wee bit too long. I'd also like the tail to be a bit longer and fluffier but that's just my personal preference

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I love this one a whole lot better! I think, it actually looks like the Spectrum telenine now. <333

If this were to go through, the more expensive colors (like Reborn, Angelic etcetc...) would be updated, right? Except Spectrum, I think. <333

I love this. Definately voting new.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I liek the old one alot and I like the new one too... I think the new one's eyes are a LITTLE BIT to small. You can't see much of the red...but other than that I really like it! Good job.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I absolutely love it. It stays true enough to the old Telenine, while make some much needed improvements. I love the proportions, and the tail itself is a masterpiece. It looks totally alive while still suggesting the ambiguity of personality the art staff is seeking.

The two minors improvements I would suggest would be for it to have eyes that are a tad bigger, and for the tuft of fur ontop of it's head to be a bit more flowing and more seperation of the strands. But I still vote new.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Thanks for making it better, Tsume. <3 Perfect. Even if I picked the LAST revamp, I love the facial expression on this.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I liked both versions equally so I let Hubby choose and he picked old so I did.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I dont really like this telenine I like the old one but this one is definitly going to win the poll

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Welcomeness <3

I agree angelembryo. XD It could also be that everything is smaller than the original, and the body looks slightly shorter.

O_O OK, I'll shut up now... runs away

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Thanks, raynemd!

Now that I've seen it, I've gotta say that I love it!

Hopefully whatever's causing the dreaded red X will be discovered and fixed before this revamp is applied, however.

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