August 9, 2020, 11:34 pm by Gandalf
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Thank you both so much for taking the time to read and comment on my story! It really means a lot!

Akita: haha, I love both these characters and would gladly write more of them if I can find another story of theirs to tell!

August 9, 2020, 3:52 pm by past
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This is such a realistic story. I loved how it explored very real issues. Great work

August 8, 2020, 10:08 pm by Akita
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i love this we need more

August 8, 2020, 7:07 pm by Gandalf
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Thank you guys so much! Can't express how happy it makes me that you all took the time to read my story and comment!

August 8, 2020, 3:32 pm by Thespian
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yooo that was such an incredible read?? congrats on the win, absolutely stunning pet!! * v *

August 8, 2020, 1:29 pm by Mackenzi
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Loved this story, congrats on the win!

August 8, 2020, 11:53 am by SYLVAN
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Beautifully written story about an often overlooked real-life topic, I devoured every last word. Congratulations on your wonderful spotlight win.

August 8, 2020, 10:32 am by Gandalf
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Thank you all so much! Ramon is my baby, and it means the world to me that you all took the time to read this story and to comment here!

RiOT: I'm the daughter of immigrants as well, and so this story was heavily inspired by my own experiences and feelings growing up in the US. :)

Ace: Ahhh, I'm really happy to know that you've read his story before! I put a lot of effort into him, and I'm glad that it's being seen

Shadowfax: Marissa will be there to help Ramon going forward as well!

August 8, 2020, 4:48 am by Chrysariel
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Congrats! Very nice pet and wonderful story. :)

August 8, 2020, 4:01 am by Damon
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Congrats, very well done! Lovely pet!

August 8, 2020, 3:26 am by Shadowfax
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But what about Ramon?!

Congrats!

August 8, 2020, 12:20 am by JOJO
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ahh, what an incredible, well-written story!! as the daughter of latin immigrants, this story hit a lil different.

SPOILER (click to toggle) i loved ramon's and marissa's relationship with one another-- i hope they're able to rise above their barista positions someday. (:

August 8, 2020, 12:13 am by wyrm
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Ooh! I remember this story! Congratulations! I still love this bean.

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