October 6, 2014, 8:15 pm by gallows
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Damn, I loved this. The stream of conscious style gave character shape to the words, to the point that I felt almost voyeuristic reading it (which is fantastic)

Litmus test. Positive. Acidic. You are acidic in a basic world. 

I am deteriorating. I am hunger. I don’t speak fluidly. I write incoherently. 

are some of my favorite lines, I loved the imagery that came out (wanting to steep like tea, stale noodles, snow and spiral staircases) – this was a great read! I enjoyed your writing a lot c: congratulations on the win!

October 6, 2014, 3:50 pm by Rajah
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Congrats! Definitely reminds me of the book House of Leaves.

October 6, 2014, 10:53 am by erinh
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congrats on winning

October 6, 2014, 1:05 am by Blanche
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Such a nice quote... I like this pet. :3 Congrats on the win!

October 6, 2014, 12:06 am by FCoD
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Congrats on your win. :)

October 6, 2014, 12:05 am by Damon
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Congrats on your well deserved win.

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