Hiya people of Subeta None of my friends play anymore so I was wondering if anyone could give me feedback on my pet Sateenkaari story.

Thank you

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I really enjoyed the message of Sateenkaari's story and some of the descriptive word use really make thing "pop". I especially love this part "With Vex by her side, Sateenkaari learned that being different wasn’t a barrier but a bridge to finding her people. She danced through life, her heart glowing with the joy of belonging—not just to a group, but to herself." How beautiful.

The only real change I would suggest is trading out "it / it's" for "they / theirs" when referring to Vex (unless the current is a very deliberate choice) as "it" is generally for objects and "they" is more a pronoun for beings.