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May 11, 2024 1 year ago
Smash
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Bunny

I’m not super experienced in doing outfits :) I’m always up for feedback :) Thank you :)


May 12, 2024 1 year ago
Frenchi
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Vivisect

ooh, it's very eerie and ethereal! i love the colors and the use of that hair. the only thing throwing it off for me is the face, specifically the mouth and the lack of eyebrows. the super bright pink smiling lips don't really mesh with everything else, and i feel like the expression is lacking without eyebrows and potentially other ways to adjust/emphasize the shape of the eyes like eyeshadow and eyeliner. i also think a lot of people overlook how much some good blushing can benefit the depth, detail, and cohesion of a look.

May 12, 2024 1 year ago
Diamondixi
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SummerFlight

Ditto to what Frenchi stated. Maybe a paler lipstick or something like this and maybe might give it some pop. The tears are a nice touch :) If you're going to use a foreground item, such as the mice that you have, it's really hard to see them, so either eliminating that item or switching to something that would fit the theme of your avvie would work in your favor. I find if you're going for a somber touch to use one of the ghost or spirit companions. Layering also makes a big difference, so I think maybe adding a glittery item or another "light source" item could also work.

Here are some of examples of some of my past avvies that show how doing layering and finding items that fit your theme blend in together:

by Diamondixi by Diamondixi by Diamondixi


May 12, 2024 1 year ago
Smash
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Bunny

thank you so much for the examples and feedback. The reason behind the foreground object is that it’s a cw for my best friends on here (chatterbox crew specifically for being the first person to be nice to me on here). But I may remove it and just put it in my gallery:) Also, how do you put the ha examples like you did? I’m not good at the scode stuff on here thank you so much for the feedback :) I hadn’t even thought about eyebrows 😆 I need to up my game 😆


May 12, 2024 1 year ago
springblom
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<3 <3 <3 Love that our paths crossed here.

May 12, 2024 1 year ago
Frenchi
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Quote by Smash
Also, how do you put the ha examples like you did? I’m not good at the scode stuff on here

in the wardrobe, click on the outfits tab and then click on the outfit you want to share. at the end of the page URL you'll see a series of numbers; this is the outfit ID. copy these numbers and then, wherever you want to post the outfit, type the following sCode:

[outfit=######] with the pound signs replaced with the outfit ID number you just copied, of course.

May 12, 2024 1 year ago
Smash
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Bunny

thank you so much!


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