Profile Critiques, Please?
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hey there! i'm a newer user to the site (joined back in March), and i'm just now trying to get my pets' profiles together, haha.
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are the four i've been working on the most/have made the most progress on, and if it's alright, i'd like some feedback on them if at all possible! i'd like to nominate all 3 of them for the pet spotlight once they're done, so feedback in that regard would be nice c:
notes: prophet: needs custom overlay (commissioned), more friends, more treasures?; also wrt the story it's absolutely adapted from something i'd already written which i feel is a little obvious haha. ideas to better suit it to the world of subeta welcome! i'm also considering using another lookup template entirely to better showcase the background... but haven't pulled the trigger on giving it a try yet, something like the one i'm using for arcade's maybe? LAZARUS: needs finished story, more treasures. i want to give them more interests than just the rift (though it Has taken up most of their time since becoming riftborn) ARCADE: needs friends, more treasures (i intend to go Ape once neugarten hits), i'd also like to write more punny beer names for its beer list Lollipup: needs more writing/info, friends, more treasures
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i think they look great! love the font choices so much that i was compelled to go on a little downloading spree lol.
i don't think you necessarily need to change prophet's story to fit more into the subeta world; plenty of pet stories, including spotlight winners, have nothing to do with subeta at all and take place entirely in their own context.
my only note is that the font size on arcade's profile is a little too small to comfortably read, and the link color is also hard to read with the gray drop shadow. i'd recommend increasing the font size, at least for the story portion (the current size is ok for the sidebar i think), and maybe switching the link shadow from gray to dark pink.
