Hi, I am testing out working with CWs and I was wanting any critiques or opinions on the line art so far. I also added the sketch and a failed skirt sketch as well if anyone wants to take a peek at that. Thank you in advance for looking!

Line Art + Sketch

Failed Skirt Sketch

This is a really good start! I think your line quality and detail is really good. My only recommendation is to make the lines thinner. It doesn't need to be as thick as the line art on the base of the avatar, or it'll end up too thick!