EDIT: final draft??

hey all we're looking for feedback on this piece, and also wondering if anyone has interest in a few nixie/mermaid CWs like this.

the draft:

ive been looking at it a really long time tbh and i cant really even tell what it looks like anymore, so like i said feedback is appreciated.

-sly

This is an awesome start and a very creative mod! Love it! I love the colors you chose and from what I can see of the shading, it looks good. The lineart is just a little thin around the edges, so I would just slightly bump that up a bit.

wow thanks that means a lot, and i put some work into the lineart (might be too thick now, lol)

Sorry for the delayed reply! But you're welcome, always happy to help. ^_^ I actually think your new lineart looks great! The only too thick line might be the inner thigh line, but that might just be the shadow there giving the illusion of a thick line.

The only real feedback I have now is that your hightlighted area is a bit stark, I would try softening it by erasing the highlight into a scale pattern, and maybe add a few speckles of highlight away from the main line. (Quick example below)

I hope that helps!