Hey!

I've finished writing Naabi's presentation (you will notice it's my active pet). It's not a full story, it's more like a brief introduction of her past and her motives to be who she is now, this is a format I plan for all my pet profiles.

The thing is: english is not my first language, so I felt like I used the same words too much and maybe it's too repetitive? And I found it difficult to make good descriptions and create a more involving atmosphere because of my limited vocabulary. So I'm here to ask for suggestions! Also if you notice grammatical errors and mispellings, it would help me a lot!

Oh and one last question, is the pet profile the only page where we can freely write like this? Because I wanted to make the pet profiles reserved for their own presentation, but then I would like to have a separated page to write their stories coming together, make all the events unroll. Is that possible? Or only out of the site?