I was wondering if y'all could tell me if my art shop first post is cohesive/makes sense/is easy to read. What could make it easier to commission me? Is there more I could do to show my art off better/organize better? Any suggestions? I

Here's the shop in question.

[EDIT] As any further posting would constitute a necro, I've gone ahead and locked the topic. [/EDIT]

the only thing i'd change is to add a form people can copy and paste to fill it in. In general, the less people have to read the better. If I look for at, I just go straight to the examples and prices and usually don't read anything else until I decide I'm interested.

Does that look better? I added the form into the post.

Have a T.O.S. somewhere to protect yourself. Is the art for private use? Can it be used freely for comercial purposes with no inquiry from you? Etc. Always have a T.O.S.

Done that, does it look good?

Looks good. Always look around for things you are or not fine with and keep it up to date with your related desires.