DESCRIPTION A chapbook with 18 poems exploring a story that takes place in the inbetween of things, where everything lasts forever and eternity is already over.
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It's completely pay what you want, so you can get it here.
I'd love it if some of you guys checked it out! I'm not looking for critique per se, since I'm not very satisfied with the book overall, and I've seen my progression as I write- so I'm confident I'll be writing better with the next book, but I'd love to know what people think about it, and get your thoughts on it.
How amazing! I checked it out and it's pretty cool. I really like your writing, even though you say you're not satisfied with the book, and I think it's great that you feel you learned a lot from the experience.
Publishing a little chapbook like this is something I really want to do myself someday. It's kinda inspiring to see how nice yours is <3
I am much better at saying detailed things about individual poems than entire books, but I want you to know I enjoyed reading your poems. You have some thought-provoking metaphors - I like all the metaphors you have that involve the human body, it seems to relate back to the title of the work, divination through bones. And there are many smaller lines and phrases that just evoke poignant imagery, such as "A single wing in all the nets my lodgers had spun" and "the moon in the water opens her gaping maw".
Thank you for sharing this with us here :)
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I took a look at the chapter book, however, could not purchase it as I am DEAD broke :'( From what I had seen, I thought it looked very clean cut and organized. The cover art is beautiful, and I think the title has a very powerful feel and entity to it. I like how (from the screenshots I've seen) the pages are black. I think its an interesting change from most books published.
I think it's really cool that you've published something! You should be very proud of yourself, a lot of people get a bit intimidated and such when pursuing a dream (or aspiration?) and it is something that I think more people should follow in your steps.
I hope more people will come across your work!
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