Hello ^_____^
I was wondering if some of you would like to review my pet Siska's profile? She's my dog irl, so it means a lot to me that she's perfectly finished :3
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it's really cute, i like it a lot!
this is more of a personal preference but i think the treasure would look better if it were scooched down a bit so there wasn't as much space below it, and if there were three items in the last row - that might just be me, though.
i also noticed a couple of minor typos in the story - in the third paragraph "I didn't had to choose" should be "I didn't have to choose" and in the last paragraph "the darkest allies" should say "the darkest alleys."
Oh right I see it now! Thank you a lot! <3
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