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Oct 15, 2017 8 years ago
Yer a wizard
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Hello ^_____^

I was wondering if some of you would like to review my pet Siska's profile? She's my dog irl, so it means a lot to me that she's perfectly finished :3

Oct 17, 2017 8 years ago
Frenchi
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it's really cute, i like it a lot!

this is more of a personal preference but i think the treasure would look better if it were scooched down a bit so there wasn't as much space below it, and if there were three items in the last row - that might just be me, though.

i also noticed a couple of minor typos in the story - in the third paragraph "I didn't had to choose" should be "I didn't have to choose" and in the last paragraph "the darkest allies" should say "the darkest alleys."

Oct 17, 2017 8 years ago
Yer a wizard
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Oh right I see it now! Thank you a lot! <3

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