Well, I came on Subeta today and saw this....

GleamSnowette's pet spotlight nomination was denied for the following reason(s): • This is a cute story! There are a few spelling mistakes that I saw but mostly what would be nice is if the story flowed a bit better. There is a pet spotlight support group and they usually are more than happy to help with stories. There just seems to be a lot of sentences that are so close they sound like repeats.

So I apparently don't even RECALL putting GleamSnowette up for spotlight nomination. But it happened and I got rejected.. So could anyone offer me some advice on how to improve her story? I've looked through it and fixed some spelling/ grammatical errors already. :)