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Jul 29, 2017 8 years ago
Merlin
needs a vacation!
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Mullberry

(Not sure if this is the right forum, please move if not)

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Description: Another fantasy from the gem encrusted plushie creator, this time... It has not special story or meaning, it only exists to be cuddled during the cold winter nights!

Does this mean that the creator is gem encrusted?! Cos I sure hope so. Who are they and where are they now? These are the things I need to know.

The grammar is just-? xD Not sure why 'this time' is tacked on to the end of that sentence and also it should say, it has 'no' special story instead of 'not'.

Jul 30, 2017 8 years ago
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Destiny
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Dexter

You are right and it could use some tweaking but the gem encrusted part refers to the line of plushies and not the creator sadly xD

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Jul 30, 2017 8 years ago
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Speiro
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Not sure why &;this time&; is tacked on to the end of that sentence

Because some of the other gem-encrusted plushies have stories in their descriptions. :P


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