So I need feedback on the profiles for the following pets:
Oshacloud GleamSnowette SonataMoon
This is pretty important to me since I'll likely be putting these three up for Pet Spotlight soon (GleamSnowette will be first).
Pinging for some help!
[tot=PiplupMagby34]
First impression suggestions:
SonataMoon: Fixed width on the Tc at least so the number of tc items remains the same (and even). Color or hiding the pet stats.
Oshacloud Bg too bright for me tbh. Same as previous about the width of the tc and stats appearance. Bg for the minion white or border around the minion image alone?? Myabe remove the "OshaCloud has a minion! " text?? idk
GleamSnowette: Love the color fade of the background. Adjust the size of the pet image (you have the pet image beginning to repeat on the right side so) back to the 200px x 200px would probably be best. Same as before about the width for the tc and the look of the stats.
They/ThemOshaCloud I agree that the colors are a bit too bright. I'm not sure how they go with the story or the pet, either. And the circles don't quite match up right in the BG. I'd break up the dialogue a bit with the formatting. I think text reads easier that way, but that's mostly a personal opinion.
SonataMoon Cute story for a plushie collection! :3 You need to put in your story/profile credits somewhere.
GleamSnowette Ah, I love the color fade BG, too! It's like going deper into the water.
I noticed it on the first profile, but closed it out before checking on the others, but the Hustler was showing up for me.
.hustler{display:none;} should take care of it.
The BG for Oshacloud is a reference to Pikachu's face. :) Oshacloud is a reference/ tribute pet to Pokemon.
[tot=PiplupMagby34]
OshaCloud - For me, the background is too bright, especially when you're trying to read the story. I don't know coding, so please forgive me if I'm using the wrong terms. Would it be possible for the story to be in it's own frame and the background faded? It's also really hard reading the story when the background switches between colors. Also, I'm not all that familiar with Pokemon, but are the last four treasure chest items related to the Pokemon theme? I understand all of the other TC items, but not those ones.
GleamSnowette - I really like this one! Especially how the background gets darker and darker the farther you scroll, like you're diving into the ocean <3
SonataMoon - Would it be possible to adjust the heart behind the minion? It's difficult to read the minion text with the Angelic Dillema's foot.