I have a hard time putting what I mean into words..Can someone help me I feel like im in a huge run on sentence and repeating myself.. Here is what ive got so far: This site has only one author one photographer one well everything.. Moon12216reviews does it all(well all that weebly her site host doesn't do..) Moon12216reviews started doing reviews back in 2012 as a way to try new things and branch out of her shell. She was always running ideas through her head but had no one to share them with..So she started with websites like bzzagent and now has worked with subscription box companies such as lovewithfood. Sometimes the products she gets are free or discounted but not all the time. She would love to review more products for her followers but it can get expensive..She doesn't ask for donations or help on getting things to review so things get slow..Just hang in there and watch out for a new youtube video showing new stuff or giving updates..Youtube seems to be her go to media source..She has tried google+ but since has more followers on youtube she uses it as her main source.Just remember she is a NON paid reviewer/blogger/YouTuber/ect..

I have a hard time putting what I mean into words..Can someone help me? I feel like I'm writing a huge run-on sentence and repeating myself... Here is what I've got so far: This site has only one author, one photographer, one well... everything. Moon12216reviews does it all (that is, all that Weebly her site host doesn't do..) Moon12216reviews started doing reviews back in 2012 as a way to try new things and branch out of her shell (usually we'd say "branch out" or "break out of her shell", rather than using a combination of the two). She was always running ideas through her head but had no one to share them with. So, she started with websites like Bzzagent and now has worked with subscription box companies such as Lovewithfood. Sometimes the products she gets are free or discounted but not all the time. She would love to review more products for her followers, but it can get expensive. She doesn't ask for donations or help on getting things to review, so things can get slow. Just hang in there and watch out for a new youtube video showing new stuff or giving updates. Youtube seems to be her go to media source. She has tried google+, but since she has more followers on Youtube she uses it as her main source. Just remember she is a NON paid reviewer/blogger/YouTuber/etc...

(corrected grammar and spelling) (youtube as a website should be capitalized. However, when using it in a phrase like "youtube video", I don't know that it necessarily has to be. I guess that's your call, unless someone else has an opinion) :)

For general grammar/clarity, make sure every sentence ends with a period and space, like ". " instead of "..". It also seems like you would be interested in learning comma usage - here's a quick guide. It has examples, but feel free to ping me if you have any quick questions.

Remember, you'll get better at writing if you do it often and get feedback! Practice makes progress.

Thank you.

Hi I have got the same obstacles as you. Sometimes I ask someone for help too who is better at this than I.

Besides English is not my native speak.

Thank you too for the link. :)