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Sep 29, 2016 9 years ago
MidnaMoon
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Cyborg Mordyn

What do you think about Roupe's profile? subeta.net/pets/Roupe I think I've finally finished it. I'm not sure about the text font though. Thoughts? Please be nice, this is my first profile.

Credits to Frenchi for helping me code a huge deal of it. Thank you Frenchi.

[font=monospace] Autistic, Bipolar, Depressed, OCDed(and who knows what the hell else I have honestly) and really really anxious over every little thing. Yup that's me! Call me Midna, pleasure to meet you.[/font]

Sep 30, 2016 9 years ago
Elysium
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Ren

One thing I'd suggest is adjusting the background so that it overlaps more smoothly than what it is right now, where different hoof prints are broken and patched against one another where one edge meets another. In the section for Roupe at the top, may I also suggest changing out "wolf" and "bear" with the subsequent Subeta-related species(I suppose Kumos and Anyu) since you used Antlephore instead of "deer"? Also-also, placing Pronunciation on its own line underneath Name.

All of that aside I like the artwork you have for Roupe as well as his minion which is quite cute and fitting for the story you're telling, likewise of the treasure chest. Roupe's a cute derp. A little fine-tuning and you'll be pretty solid.

Oct 1, 2016 9 years ago
MidnaMoon
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Cyborg Mordyn

Thanks. Im not really aiming for perfection or anything but Im glad you like some parts. And I needed a woodland animal that people generally would be afraid to meet. If you say Kumos or Anyu it doesn't sound as threatening to me. But. Thats why I chose to write bear and wolf. Is it against the rules to name real animals in our stories? I didnt know if so. Anyway, thanks for the critique.

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Oct 3, 2016 9 years ago
Frenchi
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Vivisect

oh btw if you want the background to tile you can use http://i.imgur.com/VI8vnYc.png

Oct 15, 2016 9 years ago
Dotty
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Pippa

I like it, but I'd definitely use the background that Frenchi suggested so that it lines up nicely. The only other comment I have is that the font for the pet information is a little hard for me to read, but that might just be me. (:

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