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Sep 19, 2016 9 years ago
Unicorn
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I've been working on most of my pets' profiles/stories/art stuff for some time

Hopefully have completed these ones: Adelonda Suga Ginko Please review, rate, comment, like, suggest, etc. Don't forget to ping me.

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Sep 21, 2016 9 years ago
Dotty
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I'm awful at writing so I hope it's okay to just rate the graphics? Adelonda: I really love the colours used, and the art is really wonderful. The background is super imaginative and quite detailed, however the moving effect makes me a little dizzy and there's also a slight stutter every now and then. I think this could be helped by adding a solid background behind the text, so that the background moving behind it doesn't interfere with reading. I'd also suggest taking away or altering the text shadow as combined with the moving background the text becomes very difficult to focus on. I think that perhaps making the shadow a different colour (maybe darker than the text instead of lighter) might help this.

Suga: I love how simple this is against a really lovely background. However, the text shadow again seems to be a problem and makes the text look blurry. I believe it'd look better to remove it completely and have the main text match the style of the 'nominate pet for spotlight' text. I'd also consider editing the middle yellow strip on the right hand side slightly, as you can see a line down that side where it meets the blue side (in comparison the left side looks really well done and blends nicely).

Ginko: It's so simple and so good, I think this is my favourite! I don't think I have a lot else to say, other than suggesting that the treasure be moved down by about 10 pixels (making it not quite as close to that last paragraph of text, and that the pet name & details be moved up about 30 pixels, as it slightly overlaps the image.

Overall, I think your pets are really good and you've done a great job of them. I hope my feedback was useful! x

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Sep 26, 2016 9 years ago
qvarr
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One thing you should keep in mind of is the size of your pet profile pages. Adelonda's profile page is too big for me to view and I have to reduce the size of my webpage to 50% to see everything. If you do want to keep the page that size, enable scrolling so smaller monitor and screens can still see it.

Also, the background is nice, but like Dotty said, there is a jitter towards the end of its animation. The animation is a bit distracting and hard on the eyes, so I would suggest slowing down the movement/animation. The background takes away the focus on your pet.

For Suga, I am not sure if you wanted this, but if you wanted the background to span the entire size of the webpage since the content is larger than the background, you can make the background have the fixed property

background-size: cover; background-attachment: fixed

For Ginko's, that is my favorite one amongst the 3. The only issue is that I cannot see the TC due to my small screen size. Either allow horizontal scrolling or bring the TC more towards the left.


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