I just doodled this wig D:

Will post more soon ;A;
If there is at least a bit of interest, I'll sell/auction this desing for USD (maaaaybe sp/CSC) I really need money for school ;A;
Thank you~!
EDIT:
Just finished shading it ;A;

Any critique? I'm kind of new into CW making/Cell shading :,3
Thank you!
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Its a cute design. Since I am not an artist I am not sure what directions to share to move it in the right direction tho, but it is getting close. :)
It's cute and I think it definitely has potential, but right now it seems a little disjointed in terms of style. The smooth, swooping bangs seem like they go with a different hairdo than the curls. Like, is this more of a glam vintage look (like the bangs suggest) or romantic nature-y waves?
The little tuft of hair on the right (HA's left) on the forehead just looks like a chunk of hair got snipped; I'd remove that. Lastly, I think the chunk of hair that falls across the body from the left (HA's right) looks a little stiff, like it would be more natural for it to fall more on the left arm.
As for actual technical coloring things I have no experience or ability with that so no comments there!