Update 15 July

U KNO WHOS AMAZING GUYS and she also kindly threw in some recolours aaaa i cant thank her enough ugly sobbing

here have this rose bunny thing

Holy shit pls finish it omfg I liek. But tbh I cannot help you with the shading and all. I'm learning myself t__t

omg you so presh thank chuuu ;-; would you happen to know if anyone else would be interested lol OTL

Maybe these people will! I pinged the sailor moon group c:

I cant help with the drawing aspect of it! But I think this is adorable!! n-n

so thats the infamous group ive head about kek thank you so much for helping me to ping! T^T

ahhh thank you so much for the support! ;w;

OMG FINISH THESE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD! _ heavy breathing I like legit need this dress! <3

I think it's cute, though the train could be a little more flowy maybe? I dunno the shape of the train just seems a little off to me but it's very cute.

@Cresenta heAVY BREATHING

yisss this is the kind of feedback i need, thank youu! ;-; do you happen to have any trains i could reference perhaps? im still so new to cw art hehe /blushes gratefully

Unfortunately, I'm not an artist so I can't seem to put words to what looks off, it may just be the lining on the left side of the train and how the shape of the train is, it may need to be tweaked to kind of flow in the other direction since the HA is kinda facing off center.

Can you help put words to what I mean, if you see it too? Or add any other tips and such for ?

Ooh also, I'd say keep the lining on the dress part on the left after the leg there since otherwise it kinda looks weird with the thick lining near the legs and then it suddenly stopping. Other such wears do seem to keep (most) of the lining on skirt/train combo pieces. Like:

I should give feedback too ... n.n haa. I like the shoulder wings but I decided to look closely at them with photoshop and it looks like the golden aura that you've added is not showing at all (small details = get erased), It's really faint and I have to squint a lot to see.

ahhh thank you for those! that explanation does help, along with those CWs! i'll tweak it when i can! c:

hehe yeah they were just for fun xD they werent supposed to be obvious! but now that you mention it, i suppose since i put them in, might as well try to bring them out more q.q

Very cute and beautiful, I am in love with the rose version! <3 The train like Silvanesti mentioned would be awesome, and the hem of the shrit part being perhaps asymmetrical?

nyaa thank you ^^ i think i can use the ruffle and bustle to reference - since that was more or less the idea i was looking for! mmm also what do you mean by the hem of the skirt being asymmetrical? as in i should make it more rounded to follow the shape (i should do that omg brilliant) or should it be long on one/both sides? c:

-- edit: to any/every-one i need to sleep now ahh but omg finally i got 3 stars on that forum thing xD

Yes, somehow following the shape of the train in flow. You´ll see, it´s going to be gorgeous! <3

Hope you had a nice sleep. I would be interested in the pink/blush one. I like the mint color too.

hey i like what you've got going so far! i agree with that the train needs some work. i kind of keep looking at the physics of it and mentally going "how???" i think a shape something similar to this might do a better service to the design you want? (lol shaky mouse lines in 2 seconds) the HA base has always been anatomically weird tho so i def can see how proportion occasionally gets thrown out the window for aesthetic also, since you have such a thick outline, i'd maybe beef up the lining for the details in the bodice? right now i'm kind of squinting to even tell what they are and i know the implied design by heart. you've gone with flowers instead of the normal circles?

also i'm gonna ping my bestie to see if she can give you some shading advice :o (she's not on that often but she's really great)

yes, please finish it omg! <3 I can't offer any advice because I have no idea what I'm doing,lol. But, it looks like you have some good advice/feedback already. Keep going, I'm very interested in seeing it finished :)

OMG, please finish this! ;O; It's so gorgeous! I love the hi-low skirt, and the arm/shoulder puffs, and just omg all of it. I have a need! <3

I'm going to echo the outcry for absolute need of these dresses! Unfortunately, however, I am not a CW artist so I can't really offer any advice. :<

I really love the pastel-y colours you have going! Of course I'd love to see a traditional white. I love shades of light blue and light orange. Just throwing that out there. x3

And I actually really like the smaller lining of the detail in the bodice. I feel like the outline of the dress in its entirety could use a little thinning out? Not much at all, mind you. It just seems a little... fuzzy? on our right (the HAs left) side.