Hello everyone!

Been practicing for a while and finally happy with one outfit I have drawn up. Let me know if there is interest and pricing :)

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[@ballet] Hi there ! There's a few things I see that could use a bit of critiquing, do you mind if I provide some ? If not, it's alright.

Sure, i'd love to improve :)

[@ballet] Alrighty ! Please note that while this looks long, it's not too much. And you are doing a great job for the first set ! Your lines are looking nice, but maybe a little thin or not solid in some places. I click off my tapering/weight when doing lines as I find it messes them up. 2px should be perfect ! The internal lines could be tapered/thinned some, and the armpit needs a line near the bottom to show the crease. Also, internal lines can be a daaaaark color instead of solid black, but sometimes that doesn't really work (just thought I'd let you know to see if you wanted to play some with that idea !) Your shading looks like you're using a soft brush. While using soft brushes can add to something (like if you're adding an extra shaded layer for hair, a multiply layer that will darken everything under it), or adding an ombre/fading look or something is fine, using soft brushes for the actual overall shading doesn't fit Subeta's art style (this is something I've struggled with a lot as I prefer to do softer and more painterly shading ahaha) The bunny looks like it could use more shading to it, too (it's so cute though !), and the coloring of what it's in doesn't really match the coloring on the shirt, it looks less saturated. While the soft/ombre look for the stockings is fine (in my opinion ! But I am not an official word or anything), it doesn't look like it has real shading to it. Sheer items still need different layers of shading and for something like stockings you can follow the base of the HA ! You are free to comment me if you want, if there is any form of confusion, or anything ! ❤️