So I'm working on my first CW, and just finished redoing my CI for it. I'm not great at shading, so I wanted opinions and advice on how to fix it if I should c: Below is what I currently have. Any help would be great!

Edit: oops I didn't realize I was still on join request sorry! It was showing up in my groups so I thought I was in it until I didn't receive a ping. SORRY!!! ;o;

If this is the wrong forum section please let me know! I was confused on whether it should have gone into art discussion or here :c