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Feb 6, 2016 10 years ago
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Thousands of years in the past some of humanity left the Earth, abandoning the rest as they felt them unworthy. The humans that remained were forced to survive the changing planet on their on. Soon the planet was beset by plagues leaving the remaining humans forced to change so that they could survive.

Through trial and error, a process using genetic manipulation was found to allow a person to change into any animal at will. The humans on Earth now called themselves Drethiveal and the process of changing was called Aveal.

The new inhabitants of Earth changed names of places in their distaste of what species they had once been. Human became the foulest word a person could speak.

It had seemed that humans and Drethiveal would leave each other alone until Buteo Ralph finds that humans are returning. He soon finds that he must become what he had never wanted to be: a warrior.

HERE is the webseries n.n

Current Chapter: Chapter 6: The Legend of Fang

Oh, yeah, I'm writing itXD

Feedback would be most appreciated :)

Feb 6, 2016 10 years ago
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Geralt_of_Rivia

sounds interesting :) i'm real sorry but i can't afford to contribute anything, but i do wish you luck on it :)

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Feb 6, 2016 10 years ago
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Thanks =D

Might get a chapter or two written during the wait time so I can get them out quicker when a goal is reached. Or maybe not.

Who knowsXD

And if you want to help out, you can show it to those you think would be interested in it n.n

Spreading it out a lot I should get a few bites =D

Edit: Chapter 1 ish out now =D

Mar 13, 2016 10 years ago
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ohhh i need to go get caught up :)

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Mar 14, 2016 10 years ago
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Yes you do :)

Mar 14, 2016 10 years ago
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i will later, engrossed in TWD right now though :)

edit: oh damn! only 3 more episodes this season 😢

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Mar 15, 2016 10 years ago
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Really loved the latest episode. Was an examination of Carol's psyche.

Don't think I can have a blog post about my thoughts on that interpretation out by next episode >.<

Doing a super long blog post on Life is StrangeXD

Mar 15, 2016 10 years ago
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i agree about carol and it was an awesome episode :) .. ummm not familiar with LIS...

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Mar 19, 2016 10 years ago
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Life is Strange is basically a possible murder mystery with time traveling thrown in. Though I consider it a coming of age tale in its own STRANGE wayXD

What did you think of the first chapter of Gaia n.n

Currently 1k of 3k words of Chapter 2.

Been busy this week but luckily things should slow down now as SSI stuff is over withXD

Mar 19, 2016 10 years ago
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sry i didn't notice your ping, i was watching 'fantastic four: silver surfer' ..i really liked the first chapter :D can't wait for more :)..lol i keep finding myself wondering what they look like, esp. like when he kept calling her redbutt lol

edit: .. glad your ssi stuff is out of the way and hopefully good luck with it :)

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Mar 19, 2016 10 years ago
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It's okayXD

Buteo ish a he n.n

Frank tells him "be the father that will tell the best ones" and Nidae calls Buteo and Frank 'butt buddies".

Must put more "Buteo ish a he" next chapterXD

Stuff like this is why feedback is needed so I know what to clarify in upcoming chapters n.n

But as for Buteo's looks...I never think too much on descriptions. He has a red butt as that never goes away no matter how much he tries. As Dreth do spend the majority of their time outside I would say he'd have a little tan but he is white.

If you want to shoot me what you think they look like I'd be happy to comment n.n

Thanks. SSI can be more than annoying. Especially when they gave me two different due dates for the forms O.o

Mar 19, 2016 10 years ago
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ahh ok ..so are we talking both are males here as a couple then? hoping to adopt, right? ..i have no problem with that in the least it's just at the start it just leads you to believe them to be a couple but no reference is made to the gender so it seems frank is a males name so the other would be female, i guess just because of society or it being the 'norm' if there is a norm lol so i guess i'm thinking it would be nice to be told something to that effect in the beginning so in certain parts it wouldn't be confusing .. have i lost you here in trying to explain or i'm lost most likely lol ..it is late lol :P

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Mar 19, 2016 10 years ago
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Yeah, everyone being assumed straight is a norm and something I knew I'd have to deal with in the first chapter.

That's what the "be the father" line was supposed to help indicate as well as the "butt buddy" line.

I don't want to come out and blatantly say "HEY! I'M A GUY!!!!" because that would be really bad writing.

I don't like to edit past chapters I put up or else I'd NEVER get anything else done because one change would lead to about 50 moreXD

2 years later and Chapter 2 wouldn't have any more work done to itXD

So I will work on indicating Buteo is a guy in chapter 2. Have already made slight alterations to the dialogue.

Updated the outline for Chapter 2 to basically have a character call Buteo and Frank's relationship same-sex. Might change the wording from same-sex to gay in the chapter.

So if you're not satisfied by Chapter 2 I'll go back and edit Chapter 1 :)

Mar 19, 2016 10 years ago
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cool, sounds like that might clarify things enough or answer peoples 'wondering minds' about them from chapter 1 :) 👍

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Mar 20, 2016 10 years ago
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Yeah :)

Was going to work more on Chapter 2 tonight and then I was like...but I really want to do this one thing in Minecraft...and I've really been doing that all day in preparation for an LP I'm doing with a friend.

At least now I found an area to build instead of wandering, getting lost, and killing every pig I find O.o

Mar 20, 2016 10 years ago
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lol that's understandable.. i remember doing that on games, even putting my games on pause to go to work if i'd just completed a hard part and not made it to a save point yet :O

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Apr 12, 2016 10 years ago
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Chapter 2 is now up. I would adore any and all feedback as long as it's constructive n.n

As next chapter will be a Patreon Exclusive (aka only donators will be able to read it in full) I'm thinking of having my Q&A then and having Q&As when Patreon Exclusive chapters happen so non-donators won't be left with nothing for awhile.

So I need at least 5 questions in full. They can be about all current chapters n.n

Edit:

You watch Vikings :)

If you have, what did you think of the chapter :)

Apr 19, 2016 10 years ago
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yep...love the vikings :)

going to your blog now :)

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Apr 19, 2016 10 years ago
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dances

Hope you enjoy the chapter :)

Finally caught up with Elementary. Think next episode will have John Noble which is awesome =D

Apr 19, 2016 10 years ago
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:D indeed, enjoyed it very much..left you a thumbs up! on your comment section :)

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