so im releasing some wigs in the future. a few things i want to accomplish with this thread-

1.Opinion/feedback over Overlay and CI (Pen/pencil with a kitty charm attached) 2.Having a hard time thinking of a good name/description. 3.Interest check/pre slotting 4.Any recolors you would like for future references.

The original will probably be the light shaded cream/blond wig or the pinkish one. still not sure but im really torn over the name. Thanks in advance!

I like the shape and style of the hair a lot. It may need a bit more shading, right now its looking just a bit out of Subeta style.

The CIs all look good from what I can tell, I think the design is adorable.

Name/description....erm....I'm terrible at these haha. Charmed ___ Kitty Pen? Charmed ___ Cat Pen? ___ Cat Charmed Pen? Putting a color thing in the blank spot. Description no clue sorry!

I may be interested in slotting but I can't know for sure until I get through Lumi Shopping - I have so much hair that its one thing I need to try not to claim everything on but definitely poke me if/when you release?

oh girl, sign me up for a slot on the brown shade when these are released!

As for naming, how about Pen of The ____ Charmed Kitten // Locks of ____ Kitten Pen?

Recolor suggestions original hair color shades and or perhaps some pastel shades. :)

its a pretty wig and the ci is very cute, i dont normally go for this style much as it covers up the arm but i might have to get one, not sure on colour yet though

Thanks for the honesty :D much appreciated. even if you do or dont, its always good to know as im gonna try to do more wigs. :) sure! your name selection is very helpful. thank you. yes ill give ya ping. thanks for name tips and the overlay tip as well. I can see what you mean,so at your advice went ahead did more shading. im still in the process of it, but I think im on the right track. thanks:D

here is gonna be my original. process so far.

This wig shape is very cute, and I'd be interested in a blonde as well as salmon and/or strawberry pink (:

The only thing I'm a bit iffy with is the thickness of the inlines and the lack of light source.

At the moment the inlines and the shading looks a bit thick. Erasing out gradually some on the inlines would definitely help, especially in the areas where the light is supposed to hit most.

Same for the light source, it looks like the hair behind the shoulders has the same lighting as the front - perhaps adding a few global shadows in there to indicate that it is darker would help n_n

-- Edit: tiny tiny note on the ci! The heart wand looks a bit dodged I think. It's mostly because you tried stretching the highlights everywhere but (our) right should be more shadowed.

I'm sorry, im super bad at explaining. If you're okay with it, I can just redline / shade an example rq if it's easier ;______;

ps. the ci is super cute! ❤️

sure, i would love that if you dont mind. got a little fustered so took a break.

could you perhaps post the large ci? It's a bit hard to see right now in 64x64 n_n

(I think the only issue is that you tend to use white / super pale colors for highlights instead of a paler saturated version of the base color!)

yeah your right. thank you for pointing that out and good tips on the hair. will try that.

awesome, looking forward to seeing these on site. :)

And no problem, if you'd like any further assistance with naming feel free to ask.

Sorry, I was at work earlier qq

Okee so for the overlay, I really just thinned out the inlines and made them dark brown (as opposed to black) and added a light source (:

For the CI, I added more shadows, that's about all!

Let me know if there's anything x3

thank you for the guide. It gives me an excellent idea. Its hard for me sometimes to see abstractly on how to shade certain items. thanks so much, again :D

<3

I know the feeling, I often don't understand when people describe me anything. I need a sketch, a redline or atleat a visual indication otherwise I'll putter around for the next few hours wondering what the heck is wrong lol

Goodluck n_n

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1. I like the CI of the pen. :) It looks super cute. :)

2. Well, I don't know, but the hair style reminds me of either an anime character or an Asian pop star hair style.

3. I'd be interested in the black and brown one, but it'll be dependent on my funds when it's released. And if it's after March, I would like to be pinged personally as I might mute all the groups that I've joined as I don't want to buried in pings since I would not be able to check Subeta on a daily basis come March.

4. Recolors: Red or perhaps a multi-coloured one.

this hairstyle is adorable! I'd be interested in quite a few colors myself. Like a burgundy, blonde and plat n-n

I don't draw so I can't offer advice, but what cathii helped you out with looks awesome! Can't wait to see it available! Good luck love n-n <3