I started writing and I've read it twice but it's gotten long for me. I wanted some opinions on the story itself and if there's any part too confusing. It's 35 pages so far. My boyfriend won't read it till I complete it and he's the only one I know wiling to read it. I'd rather be rejected by a bunch of random people than by my boyfriend - so feel free to say anything you want.

//Warning Grammar is bad-awful level, english isn't my first language. It is not pg13, so I would have to send it privately.

Ooh, what's the story about :o?

I can comment on the story if you don't mind me taking a week or two. I can't really help with grammar though, because English isn't my first language either.

I'm totally interested. I've helped some previous friends in the past with their writings and took classes in school for this kind of thing. I'll even help you polish up your grammar, if you'd like. As long as you're okay with some good ole' criticism I'd love to help you out! :)

Had a fever for a bit oops!nn@pandaheronThis girl dies but her soul goes through a passing section before it revives/dies/reborn... Unexpected things happen like meeting the grim reaper. nn@kassynThat's fine c: i will send it momentarily thank you!nn@heimskrnYep, that'd be great :D I will send you the "read over" one later today since it has been fixed up a bit

Sounds fun 8D and I'm a sucker for things involving the grim reaper, so I'm interested as well~

I'm very interested in your story, since I love anything to do with the grim reaper, and I'd be glad to help you.

Oooh sounds dark. I like it! Can't wait to give it a look. ;)

hopefully I didn't miss anyone. I really gotta go back in and make things clearer/tone into the situation but I didn't want to delay it any longer so -sent-

If you need another reader, I'd be happy to look over your work ^-^