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Description: The Elemental Mage did not always have such a fine grasp on the elements. Each was learned after much study and work. Except for death. Death was the first element that the Mage mastered when he first refused to leave this mortal world. He went on to create the Graveyard Potion, a potion that brings those to the brink of Death without feeling it's cold embrace.
The possessive for 'it' should not have an apostrophe.
Thank you.
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