pet story compilation - reviews appreciated
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Hello, hello, little bookworm! I love to write stories for my pets. If you are interested to read them, you can find them all here. Please tell me what you think. I am always open-minded for critique.
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This is a short story about Kasuga, who was born as a slave and who works in a mine.
This is more like a short exposition, giving an impression about his life.
I am not sure yet if I will write about his attempt to escape. But I think about it.
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So far this is also a short exposition. Stormborn is a member of the snow tribe, but when his mother tells him about his father he goes on a journey and tries to find him.
This will definitely be continued soon.
Giyan and Arthaniel, the Galactic Paralix and Rreign
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This story is the biggest thing I started. This is a tale about Subeta's dragons and about the lives of the siblings Giyan and Arthaniel.
I continue this step by step. This has started on Giyan's page and will continue on Arthaniel's after a significant turning point. (Spoiler. Duh.)
I try to improve my writing skills, so please tell my if you find any grammar errors, awkward choice of words, unnecessary parts ...
Thank you and please enjoy! Kassy
It's delightful when your imaginations come true, isn't it?
