After my pet the Unseen got kicked out of the spotlight queue twice, I went ahead and completely redid his profile :P I'd love to get some feedback on it and/or his story to see if he's ready to go back in again!

Unsy's profile

Thanks ^X^

I really like the pet page. It's really dark and mysterious, but it comes off as like a......riddle feeling. Something that you might see in one of the plots on Subeta, which is pretty cool, but maybe they are looking for more of a personalized story for the pet spotlight? Something that tells the history or life of your pet more?

I like the theme you have going on but, at the same time, it feel like the organization is a little cluttered. The story box seems small and the minion looks a little alone down there? In general, it's good to keep the golden ratio in mind when creating a profile!

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Of course there's room to deviate to some degree or all profiles would look the same! But it's good to use it as a reference point! It seems like your already off to a good start. You just need to rearrange things a little I think.

Thanks to both of you for your feedback!

He's actually a fan pet for a species created by H. P. Lovecraft, so I probably need to add a little bit to his story... that way people who aren't familiar with the species can still understand what I'm talking about ^X^; He's supposed to be mysterious, but not so much that you have no idea what I'm talking about... so I'll work on it ^X^;

Yeah, I think I was relying too much on the background photo for organization when I structured the profile. I might move the key part down so there's more room for story/treasure/minion up top... I'll play around with it.

Thanks again!