decided to try another wig after my other failed attempts.. also need advice on how to draw better hair in general. i can never get the strands to look right :C

Just my two cents (I'm new to CWs as well so don't take my word as gospel) but it seems a little off that a big chunk of hair is right in the middle of the HAs boobs? I love how whispy it looks though!

the perspective is off - the HA base is standing at a 3/4 angle, so the hair that's currently falling in the middle of the chest should actually be falling over the HA's far shoulder. also, i think the strands are slightly too thin; i'd recommend making the individual strands about twice as thick as you have them now. other than that, the colors and style are lovely.

you're right, i wasn't paying attention to that while drawing it. i decided to just make it go behind the shoulder so less work XD here's the update (i only erased it and work on anything else yet)

yep, that looks much better :3

Muuuch better! It looks super cute!