So I was wondering if anyone would be interested in some pretty coats since fall is just around the corner! How about you

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NAMES ARE NOT FINAL!

First Image: Tootsie Tendrils

Second Image: Jaded Stockings - yeah a name plug and perhaps a start of a new clothing Line?

Third/Fourth Image: Naughty Vines - Oh my look how mischievous he looks! So Naughty!

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it should be "my little josie" or whatever title you get, even if it doesn't have her name in it. And maybe put a little toy in front of her and one of her paws batting at it.

and remember. with makeup, you cannot cover up basic facial features such as eyes nose and mouth. ears OK

- I LOVE the kitty.

Did I cover her eyes? Those are just base eyes from the site. I just added the shadow and brows

oh then you're ok

and the naughty vine, you're gonna have to make that a two-piecer. Not both in one gender and one in another. Staff will ask you to separate

I love the cat and the baby doll dress :D

All of the ideas are really cute, but a bunch of them need a few more layers of shading because they look just a bit too "flat". I'm not an artist myself so I might not see all the things that might need tweaking, and it looks really good, just the lack of enough shading is what I notice.

Edit: The only other thing they might say is that it needs to be at the same angle as the HA, so with the dresses and vines you may need to kind of adjust the way they are sitting on the HA. But I don't know exactly if that's something they might complain about since I do get the sense of the angle, but I don't know if it would be enough for them (and the added shading might actually make the angle more obvious).

The little kitten is really cute. :)

Thank you guys! I will see if I can add some more shading to a few things and re-post the adjusted ones. I just I was just afraid of adding too many and losing the definition. Thank you for your critiques! Keep em coming!!

girl, if yer gonna start a clothing line with your name, you might wanna pattern some things around the socks. That way it stays pretty uniform.

I think the Springtime Dresses are really cute! Though I'm more a fan of longer ones or skirts. I'd recommend more shading to make them look a little more realistic. My little Josie is also very cute but I like her more without the toy.

The first two I'd not be interested in. This is just not my style.

The makeup and the tattoo are nice. Maybe you should try and polish up the makeup a bit. Maybe longer lashes? For the arm tattoo I'd try thinner outlines.

My dear love , care to meet my dear old friend ForeverJaded? As you can se she starts with cw and I think the ideas and critique of a declared CW fan like you could be very appreciated!

Could it be that you ascribe to me whichever trait comes in handy for you? ô.Ô First you make me rich, then A CW junkie... shakes head in disbelief

Well, if Cave calls you her dear friend, that's about the best recommendation can anyone get. :-) I'm not the "declared CW fan" she makes me out to be, but I do buy CWs if they take my fancy. I'm picky, though, since the CW are rather expensive and I'm reluctant to spend my CSC on items I am not 100% in love with. Also, my main interest are background and dresses.

So, if you'd like the feedback from a potential customer, do read on. :-)

First off: I think I like your overall style of "drawing". :-) For the stockings, there are similar tights on site (at least the "Sheer Stockings" and some of the Vesnali Items look similar to me), so maybe you'll need a great fan (or friend) to buy them. The vines are lovely and I would have been very tempted to beg for a slot if it had been a "real" dress instead of very, very pretty "censoring bars"... The Sprintime dresses are cute, the top part with the black decorations are especially lovely. If I'll find a suitable skirt for the cream or green ones, I might consider buying one of them. I don't have much interest in shoes one way or another. They seem uncomfortably short in the toes area, though. Maybe you could consider elongating them a little? The Kitty is cute. Her right hind-leg seems to have a strange "crease" just below the hip. The make-up is nice but I think some lashes would be lovely. The tattoo is nice. Maybe you'd consider a version that would cover chest & arms or the entire body?

I hope this helps. :-) If you have any questions about my feedback (I'm a bit scatterbrained today, I'm afraid), do let me know.

Cheers & good luck with your first CWs! :-) Lanara

XD the only reason you think you don't fit with my descriptions is that you think too much in extremes!

Thank you so much for the tips! I do appreciate them very much so. I am still working on tweeking things and the shoes are not my favorite either, they need redone. :P as for the kitty I didnt notice the crease until you said something so I will fix it! As far as the dresses go, would longer be better? You said you needed a skirt to match so I am assuming longer is better? I know not everyone likes short dresses but it is just a thought. The makeup was quick and probably needs redone as well. Thank you again for the help and perhaps I will see you on my future CW thread!

Ooooohhh! The revamped dresses are sooo beautiful! I love them! Be a bit more bold with the shading though, it can be darker if you like that!

oh I dunno, just thought I'd throw this out there... jojo has some MIGHTY BIG hind quarters!

Sorry, life got busy there for a moment... As for the length of the dresses, the first version was quite lovely as for a sprintime/ summer themed HA. It's just that when I saw the applications, my first thought was "Oh dear, I'd very much love to have them for a Masquerade themed HA!". So the plan that was stuck in my mind was "Match the dress with a long skirt for masquerade and then use again for summery HAs"... XD The dress revamp is also nice. But, and I'm very, very sorry to say that!, they do remind me of christmas trees with their tiers and the vertical shades. Maybe you change the shape a little? Less "stiff" and a little more flowing, perhaps? I'm sorry I can't be of more help with that, I'm really hopeless when it comes to drawing...

If I haven't mortally offended you by my likening your dresses to christmas trees, do feel free to ping me once you release your first CW. :-)

Cheers! Lanara

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