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Aug 3, 2015 10 years ago
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Paryuu
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So, this is one of my very first cw's :'D (drag to the bar for full view) Do you like it? Would you be interested on it? ^^ It'll be one batch only, and some recolors will be private, I'll post more recolors soon.

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Aug 3, 2015 10 years ago
Violin
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heyy this is cute but one thing you need to make the outer lineart more even! right now it's thick and thin in different places ;w;

Aug 4, 2015 10 years ago
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Derek Hale

I think its a great start - like Violin said, the lineart seems a bit uneven at the moment, so you'll likely have to make it more consistent. Also it appears the shading is a bit muddy on the right-hand side (our right, the shorter section).

However, I really like the overall design and would love to slot on it if/when you release it :*

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Aug 4, 2015 10 years ago
odduckOasis
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Tenacious

Very pretty, I like it as well. I would suggest however that you make the flowers look more like they're in the hair a bit more, not just sitting on top of it. Staff has rejected cws in the past for accessories that look like they could easily be separated. But good start! GL with all your cws!

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Aug 7, 2015 10 years ago
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Paryuu
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Okay! Thank you so much! Would it be alright to ping you again when I finish it? I really apreciate your opinion q_q (I love your CW's <3)

Okay, thank you a lot~! Will fix that as well. Just as Violin, could I ping you again when fixed?

Thank you so much! Will fix it :) Thanks a lot!

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Aug 10, 2015 10 years ago
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Derek Hale

Most definitely! I would love to take another look when its ready :*

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