This is a Hobbit AU fanfiction.

“You only have one job. One job that is more important than *anything(, do you understand Thorin? You take care of Frerin, make sure he stays happy and healthy.”

“Yes momma.”

Take care of Frerin.

“Torin!”

“Wha… What did you say Frer?”

“Torin! Torin!”

“MOOOOOM! Frerin said his first word!”

“What!?”

“Torin!”

Take care of Frerin.

“It’s okay Frer it’s just a scrape. I got you baby brother.”

“It hurt.”

“I know. Want me to kiss it to make it better?”

“Uh huh.”

“There. Does it feel better?”

“Uh huh.”

“Good.”

Take care of Frerin.

“Where the hell were you!?”

“I just stepped out for a minute honest!”

SMACK

“Damn it Thorin what have I told you?”

“My only job is to take care of Frerin. Frerin is the most important thing.”

“That’ right. Now pack your shit, we have to leave NOW.”

Take care of Frerin.

“I’m hungry Thorin. When is mom coming home?”

“I don’t know Frer… here take the rest of mine.”

“Are you sure?”

“Yeah. I’m full.”

“My aren’t you a handsome boy! How much for an hour?”

Take care of Frerin.

“What do you mean you’re dropping out of high school?”

“I’m not smart like you little brother, it’s better this way. No wasting time on stuff I can’t understand. I’ll be able to get hours at the jobs that will hire me. We’ll be able to pay for stuff with actual money if mom is gone longer than she plans.”

It’ll also be easier to keep an eye on you this way.

“Well… if you’re sure…”

Take care of Frerin.

“Damn it Ambrdeth yer being an idgit!..... Don’t you walk away from me woman!”

“Don’t act like you know what I’m thinking!”

“I know enough! Look at Thorin! He’s got a broken leg and you don’t care!”

“Don’t Fundin.”

“Come on kids we’re leaving!”

“But mom me and Dwalin are….”

“Now Frerin!”

“And if I see yer idgit ass back on my property I’ll fill it full of buckshot!”

Take care of Frerin.

“You let him leave?”

“He wanted to.”

“You let him leave.”

“He’ll be happier and safer there.”

“Mom?”

“Don’t talk to me right now Thorin… I’m so disappointed in you right now.”

Take care of Frerin… Well I did and now I have nothing left to do...

Are you planning of adding any prose that isn't dialogue?

If not, then I'd suggest writing/formatting this in the same format as a screenplay.

Just a suggestion. :3

I can't decide if I want to add anything to it to tell the truth... I can see where I can add but I'm not sure if it would subtract from what I already have,

Oh, I see... Well, honestly I know nothing about the Hobbit, so I can't really help you much with how to continue...

I guess I could try, but I might misinterpret the characters since I don't know the whole story the original author planned for them, if you see what I mean... :c

I completely understand. ^^

Thank you for your suggestion about writing as a screenplay.

You're more than welcome!

You've helped me a time or two! xD

^u^