Its still not finished i still have like 5 things i wish to get to add to it but so far how dose it look?

Please be honest even if you don't think it looks good i want to know so i can fix whats wrong with it

I think that is one of the best zombie/undead avatars I've seen! I really like the exposed brain and the mouth/tongue. My only critique would be that the little cat plushie you are holding looks a little out of place (it looks too cute for the avatar you've made). Maybe replace it with something a bit more morbid to go with your theme?

I'm not a huge fan of the exposed brain, the colour and coupled with the hair makes it look a bit too comical. Possibly nix the cat as well, your hands don't look like they're holding it so it looks a bit like it's scratching its butt on you :P Also, you might want to tone down the highlights on the hair as it's super shiny.

Other than that it goes together fairly well.

ya i was kinda thinking the same with the cat plushie just been to lazzy to take it off XD

the hairs one of the 5 things i need to change i have yet to find a hair that i truly 100% like. I been dabbling with a few but so far they all just look odd on the ha. Can you sajest any?