so once again I'm playing around with cw because I can and I was messing around with a style I sorta like but I'm not too sure about it so I was hoping to get another opinion or two on it~

here goes round two

le old one

the thing is I'm aiming for a sort of poofy / messy style but It's sorta looking too lopsided to me and idk obvs it's not fully shaded cause I'd like to get it positioned correctly before I colour the whole thing~

is it good, bad, or should I just scrap it altogether?

any help and feedback is much appreciated ❤️

hm the right side is a little too big and poofy making it look lopsided its pretty cute otherwise dont scrap it keep working on it! c:

aaah so it's been a while, but I finally got my sai working properly agian and have since altered it slightly / coloured it I'm not too happy with the shading (it's kinda shiny) & I'm not sure about the colour yet, but both can be changed / altered later

here's hoping for a bit more feedback? c:

i'm by no means a good cw artist but i think it needs thicker lineart. the shading is very pretty though

IT looks really great :) The only issue may be the lines, they too thin and appears to be coloured!

I don't make CW however, I feel like the lineart should be a little darker, and the right side is a bit awkward looking? a little too poofy maybe. Also, if you're going for a messy style, maybe you should consider adding a couple of strands falling out somewhere? Just a thought. regardless, I think you should definitely keep working on it!!! Looks promising. ^^

The wig shading is beautiful seriously. I think thicken the lineart a bit though since it is thin and once again Im finding it a bit inproportionate, the right side seems a lot bigger than the other?