hello hello, thanks for coming in!

as some of you may have noticed, I'm fairly new to the CW making world, im just a curious guy with a tablet. Those are my most recent CWs, and I need every and single critique you guys can give me!

Any tips and tricks, anything. I work with paint tool SAI, so any advice for brush settings would be AMAZING. Thank you. :D :D :D

The first item looks pretty good, but the lineart blends in on the dark side, you may need lighten it, add more shading, the dark side looks like a gradient. they might say no due to those reasons. the tail's light source looks like its from the bottom, it needs to be in the same direction in the ha.

If these are your first cw attempts, they are pretty good for a starting point. Best thing to do is look what is onsite that is close to your design, gives you an idea. Only sure way to know is make a board in customwearables and see if there is enough interest. Sad thing about cw making, you can make your best and still not go onsite due to interest,unless you got the money to put it onsite yourself. hope this helps, good luck

Yeah those are my very first CWs, and I always had problems with shading in my whole "artistic life" haha. I will sure take a look at on-site CWs, I didn't do that before. Also I have a board up in the cw market but... no interested, so I think I'll have to wait till I have enough CSC to submit them myself. ^-^