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Feb 25, 2015 11 years ago
Arsenal
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This is my first time attempting to create a CW, so I decided to practice by making a simple wig. If you could help me and give me critiques- that would be great because I have no idea what I'm doing... I didn't make a CI for it because I don't know if I'm even going to use this since this is my practice item. Any help is very welcome <3

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Feb 25, 2015 11 years ago
DataBunny
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Hi there! This is actually really nice. The lines are lovely and clean, I just think there is a few things you might need to tweak to get it through :3

Do check how things resize! The lineart is lovely and clean, but the smaller bits of hair at the back of the head don't resize all that well. You may want to make some of them a little bit bigger/more defined because they blur at the smaller size. You may also want to darken more of your internal lines, at the moment it's reading as more of a sticker.

Don't forget that your light source needs to come from the upper left. At the moment it's very faint, and I think it's coming from two directions. I've roughed it in in pink for you, so you can see which side the light is coming from :3 This one is onsite, just to give you an idea of the shading. You can actually be pretty bold with how dark you go. At the moment it's all nearly the same colour.

Feb 25, 2015 11 years ago
Arsenal
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Thank you very much for the feedback that was very, very helpful! I know what I need to practice now :)

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Feb 25, 2015 11 years ago
DataBunny
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sure thing :3 You can drop me a ping if you want me to look at anything else as well

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