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I'm not really sure what I'm doing here, haha. Are the lines the right thickness? Should I change the placement of the petals? How does the shading look? Any critique would be helpful. ^^

hi! I really like the placement / angle of the flower n_n

I do think that some of the lines are a biiit thick - subeta usually allows thinner lineart for more fragile pieces since black outlines can quickly because overpowering.

I think your best bet would be to try a pale recolor (perhaps white) to test out the lineart - it should give you a better idea of how thick it is, on top of various wigs (:

Thank you for the feedback! :) I was thinking of making a white version anyway, so I'll try experimenting with the lines a bit.