That's beautiful! I really like the version with the color showing on the shaved side.

I popped it onto the avatar base and shrunk it down to see it as it would be finished. I think it could use just a bit more shading? Maybe one layer more on the hair itself, mainly focusing on the crown area and the back strands? And on the shaved part, maybe a little bit of shading like the naked HA has on it's head to show how round it is?

Also, I had one CW rejected because I didn't replace the outline where my color connected to the HA. Just to be safe you could add the black line back in around the ear so it shows properly when layered. :)

I hope that helps! You've got a really great piece :D

Thank you! c: I shall do that lol.. I hate coloring so much... -_-;;;