So I have a fun one for you guys. I'm working on pet profiles and I'm stuck on something. I'm not a great writer so I thought I would turn to the professionals.

What I would like is to get a specific sound on paper for Rattle. She's a Chibi Noktoa. My inspiration is the squawk that Kevin makes from 'Up' when she flaps at Carl..

How in the world do I TYPE that?

Please ping with thoughts, tips, suggestions!

Kevin kinda sounds like a turkey to me... with maybe a little less emphasis on the "g" sound in her "gobble"... So maybe "obble obble obble" or a lilting gobble... Or just plain gobble. -shrugs-

As for when she mimics Carl at one point in that scene, I'd probably say something like "she parroted him with a metered gobble-gobble, her cadence mocking his vexation"...

And you are BRILLIANT! That sounds really good to me, I hope that I get a chance to sit down and write soon! I didn't think to just take that G off. I just love that little scene and it just seems to work well for a baby bird personality.