Any suggestions you guys could give would be great too :)

Wow, it looks really great, it is very hard for me to give any suggestions as to how you could make it better! It's really a superb job. The coloring is great, and it isn't too busy.

I think the pink scarf is too sharp in comparison to the rest of the avie and the color sort of makes it look like the background's eating you. Could I see what it looks like without it please?